# Archive for category Deliberate Practice

### Clojure function has-factors-in?

Posted by Proctor in Clojure, Declarative Programming, Deliberate Practice, Functional Programming, Lisp, Project Euler, Refactoring on August 27, 2012

Just another quick post this evening to share a new function I created as part of cleaning up my solution to Problem 1 of Project Euler.

Was just responding to a comment on Google+ on my update sharing the post Project Euler in Clojure – Problem 16, and I saw the commenter had his own solution to problem 1. In sharing my solution I realized that I could clean up my results even further, and added a function `has-factors-in?`

. These updates have also been pushed to my Project Euler in Clojure Github repository for those interested.

(defn has-factors-in? [n coll] (some #(factor-of? % n) coll))

Where before I had:

(defn problem1 ([] (problem1 1000)) ([n] (sum (filter #(or (factor-of? 3 %) (factor-of? 5 %))) (range n))))

It now becomes:

(defn problem1 ([] (problem1 1000)) ([n] (sum (filter #(has-factors-in? % [3 5]) (range n)))))

This change makes my solution read even more like the problem statement given.

Your thoughts?

–Proctor

### Project Euler in Clojure – Problem 16

Posted by Proctor in Clojure, Deliberate Practice, Lisp, Project Euler on August 22, 2012

Here is my solution to Problem 16 of Project Euler. As always, my progress you can tracked on GitHub at https://github.com/stevenproctor/project-euler-clojure.

Problem 16 of Project Euler is:

What is the sum of the digits of the number 2^1000

This problem was straight forward since I already had the function `digits-of`

defined from problem8. I was able to be very declarative in my problem, so much so, that it reads as the problem statement you are asked to solve.

(defn problem16 ([] (problem16 1000)) ([n] (sum (digits-of (expt 2 n)))))

As always, any feedback you have for me is greatly appreciated.

–Proctor

### Project Euler in Clojure – Problem 15

Posted by Proctor in Clojure, Deliberate Practice, Lisp, Project Euler on August 16, 2012

Here is my solution to Problem 15 of Project Euler. As always, my progress you can tracked on GitHub at https://github.com/stevenproctor/project-euler-clojure.

Problem 15 of Project Euler is to find the starting number with the longest Collatz sequence, summarized from the problem page as:

Starting in the top left corner of a 22 grid, there are 6 routes (without backtracking) to the bottom right corner. How many routes are there through a 2020 grid?

I started this problem, by trying to tracing and counting the routes through grids of 2×2, 3×3, and 4×4, and even setled in and did a 5×5 square. Having these numbers, and knowing I had two choices for ever position I was in, except for when the path got to the far edge and bottom, I had a hint at the growth rate of the problem. I tried some powers of 2 with the relationship of the numbers, and some factorials with the numbers. After seeing some possible relationships with the factorials that might be leading me in the right direction, I tried a number of permutation calculations, and the combination calculations. Having seen the numbers show up in different combination results, I then spent time back-calculating from those numbers into my `n`

s, and found that the pattern seemed to match 2n Choose n.

The source code to this was the `factorial`

function:

(defn factorial [n] (multiply (range 1M (inc (bigdec n)))))

And, I could have done it recursively, but I figured I would just operate against the sequence of numbers, especially now that the reducers are available in the Clojure 1.5-Alpha 3 release (at the time of this writing) of Clojure. After I get through a few more problems (of which I am working ahead of these posts), I am thinking it would be interesting to run the same Project Euler Problems against 1.4 and 1.5 using the reducers library, just substituting map/reduce for the reduce/combine functionality, and seeing how much effort it takes to move them over, as well as the differences in the timings of the different problems.

The other base function I needed was a `combination`

function:

(defn combination [n k] (cond (zero? n) 0 (zero? k) 1 :else (/ (factorial n) (* (factorial (- n k)) (factorial k)))))

This function just does the basic calculation for combinations, from the formula:

With that, and my stumbling upon the matching of the fact that is the solution to ne number of paths through the square the function `problem15`

is defined as:

(defn problem15 ([] (problem15 20)) ([n] (combination (+ n n) n)))

As always, any feedback you have for me is greatly appreciated.

–Proctor

### Project Euler in Clojure – Problem 14

Posted by Proctor in Clojure, Deliberate Practice, Lisp, Project Euler on July 23, 2012

Here is my solution to Problem 14 of Project Euler. As always, my progress you can tracked on GitHub at https://github.com/stevenproctor/project-euler-clojure.

Problem 14 of Project Euler is to find the starting number with the longest Collatz sequence, summarized from the problem page as:

The following iterative sequence is defined for the set of positive integers: n -> n/2 (n is even) n -> 3n + 1 (n is odd) [...] Which starting number, under one million, produces the longest chain?

The first function I needed was a function to get the next number in the Collatz sequence.

(defn next-collatz [n] (cond (<= n 1) nil (even? n) (/ n 2) (odd? n) (+ (* 3 n) 1)))

This function mimics the above definition of the sequence, with the distinction of the check to see if the number is less than, or equal to, 1. While not strictly necessary, when I was generating numbers from the REPL, I noticed that the sequence never really terminates, but ends in a repeating sequence of `4 -> 2 -> 1 -> 4 -> 2 -> 1 ->...`

. This can be seen by running the following at the REPL.

(take 15 (iterate next-collatz 8))

Wich results in the sequence `(8 4 2 1 4 2 1 4 2 1 4 2 1 4 2)`

. I used the condition `(<= n 1)`

as a guard condition to as a way to be able to terminate the sequence and make it finite. This could probably be removed at this point, as I did not even use the `nil`

return as a check, except that it would serve as a reminder of the function when playing at the REPL.

The next function I defined was a function to get the count of the numbers in the sequence. I defined it this way in the hopes of trying to memoize the values, but I kept getting an OutOfMemoryException when I tried to use it so I took the memoization away.

(defn collatz-count-for [n] {:pre [(pos? n)]} (if (= n 1) 1 (inc (collatz-count-for (next-collatz n)))))

In this function, I decided I would add a precondition to the function requiring that the parameter to the function be positive. This way I could avoid having to try and generate a Collatz sequence for negative numbers, as they are outside the scope of this problem. The function first checks if the number to generate the sequence for is 1, and if so, the count of the sequence returns 1. For all other positive numbers, we get the length of the sequence for the next Collatz number in the sequence, and increment that value, and return that as the Collatz count.

As I was writing this up, I decided I would take another stab at this, and did some searching to try and find a way to change the memory allocation for the project in the REPL. I found the following post How to Set JVM Memory for Clojure REPL in Emacs, and added the following to my project.clj file.

:jvm-opts ["-Xmx768M"]

When I ran with the following memoized version of the `collatz-count-for`

, it now runs much quicker than it did before. Previously it was a rough mental counting of about 10-15 seconds, and now the first time is runs was 2-3 seconds, and sub second on runs after that even.

(def collatz-count-for (memoize (fn [n] {:pre [(pos? n)]} (if (= n 1) 1 (inc (collatz-count-for (next-collatz n)))))))

The changes needed to memoize the function `collatz-count-for`

is that the `defn`

is now a `def`

, which assigns the identifier of `collatz-count-for`

to the result of passing a now nameless function, with the previous function body, to the function `memoize`

. This allows the function body to remain the same, and only the declaration of the function has to now change.

With those pieces to the problem in place, we can now find the number that generates the longest Collatz sequence.

(defn problem14 ([] (problem14 1000000)) ([n] (first (reduce (fn [memo x] (if (> (second x) (second memo)) x memo)) (map #(vector % (collatz-count-for %)) (range 1 (inc n)))))))

I started by mapping over the numbers from 1 to 1000000, to create vectors representing the pair of the number and the sequence length for that number. An example of which results in the following sequence (shown to the first 10 numbers):

([1 1] [2 2] [3 8] [4 3] [5 6] [6 9] [7 17] [8 4] [9 20] [10 7] ...)

I then feed that sequence into `reduce`

, with a function to find the pair with the largest sequence length by calling `second`

on the vector, resulting in the pair of number and sequence length with the largest sequence length. And having found that vector, I use first to find what the number with the largest sequence length is.

This seems like it might be generic enough (idiomatic pattern) that I was missing something that was already defined to do the map and reduce on a structure like this, but I could not find anything. If anybody knows of anything I would love to see how that might be made more expressive.

–Proctor

### Project Euler in Clojure – Problem 13

Posted by Proctor in Clojure, Deliberate Practice, Lisp, Project Euler on July 15, 2012

Here is my solution to Problem 13 of Project Euler. As always, my progress you can tracked on GitHub at https://github.com/stevenproctor/project-euler-clojure.

Problem 13 of Project Euler is described as:

Work out the first ten digits of the sum of the following one-hundred 50-digit numbers. [...]

And my solution for this, including previously defined functions created as part of solving the previous problems, is the following:

(defn digits-of [n] (map #(Integer/parseInt (str %)) (str n))) (defn digits-of [n] (map #(Integer/parseInt (str %)) (str n)))

(defn problem13 [] (let [numbers [37107287533902102798797998220837590246510135740250 46376937677490009712648124896970078050417018260538 74324986199524741059474233309513058123726617309629 91942213363574161572522430563301811072406154908250 23067588207539346171171980310421047513778063246676 89261670696623633820136378418383684178734361726757 28112879812849979408065481931592621691275889832738 44274228917432520321923589422876796487670272189318 47451445736001306439091167216856844588711603153276 70386486105843025439939619828917593665686757934951 62176457141856560629502157223196586755079324193331 64906352462741904929101432445813822663347944758178 92575867718337217661963751590579239728245598838407 58203565325359399008402633568948830189458628227828 80181199384826282014278194139940567587151170094390 35398664372827112653829987240784473053190104293586 86515506006295864861532075273371959191420517255829 71693888707715466499115593487603532921714970056938 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Problem 13 was pretty straight-forward, as the problem, I took the list of the one-hundred numbers as a vector, and then called the function sum which has been used in a number of previous problems as well as the digits-of function which was created in my solution to Problem 8. With these two functions, to get the first 10 digits of the sum was to just call `take`

on the result of calling `digits-of`

on the `sum`

of the numbers in the vector `numbers`

.

The rest of the function is to make the output to the REPL nice. I take the individual digits and turn them into a string using `reduce str ""`

, and then call the function `bigint`

to cast it to an integer value.

**Update**

I have posted my solution to Problem 14.

–Proctor

### Project Euler in Clojure – Problem 12

Posted by Proctor in Clojure, Deliberate Practice, Lisp, Project Euler on July 9, 2012

This is my solution to Problem 12 of Project Euler. As always, my progress you can tracked on GitHub at https://github.com/stevenproctor/project-euler-clojure.

Problem 12 of Project Euler is described as:

The sequence of triangle numbers is generated by adding the natural numbers. So the 7th triangle number would be 1 + 2 + 3 + 4 + 5 + 6 + 7 = 28. [...] What is the value of the first triangle number to have over five hundred divisors?

And my solution for this, including previously defined functions created as part of solving the previous problems, is the following:

(defn factors-starting-at [f n] (cond (= n 1) [] (factor-of? f n) (cons f (factors-starting-at f (/ n f))) :else (recur (inc f) n))) (defn prime-factors-of [n] (factors-starting-at 2 n)) (defn factors-count [n] (multiply (map #(inc %) (vals (frequencies (prime-factors-of n)))))) (defn triangle-numbers ([] (concat [1] (triangle-numbers 1 2))) ([s n] (let [t (+ s n)] (lazy-seq (cons t (triangle-numbers t (inc n))))))) (defn problem12 [] (first (drop-while #(<= (factors-count %) 500) (triangle-numbers))))

The functions `factors-starting-at`

and `prime-factors-of`

get the prime factors of a given number. The function `factors-count`

calls `frequencies`

on the sequence returned by `prime-factors-of`

, and then increments each item in the sequence and multiplies the items together, to get the total number of factors for a number. I found this formula for getting the count of the factors from StackOverflow question: Algorithm to calculate the number of divisors of a given number.

The function `triangle-numbers`

gets a lazy sequence of the triangle numbers, by taking the previous triangle number, and adding the index of the current triangle number.

The function `problem12`

then drops the items in the sequence while the result of `factors-count`

is <= 500, and gets the first triangle number, which is the first number with a the count of the number of factors greater than 500.

–Proctor

### Project Euler in Clojure – Problem 11

Posted by Proctor in Clojure, Deliberate Practice, Lisp, Project Euler on July 8, 2012

This is my solution to Problem 11 of Project Euler. As always, my progress you can tracked on GitHub at https://github.com/stevenproctor/project-euler-clojure.

Problem 11 of Project Euler is described as:

08 02 22 97 38 15 00 40 00 75 04 05 07 78 52 12 50 77 91 08 49 49 99 40 17 81 18 57 60 87 17 40 98 43 69 48 04 56 62 00 81 49 31 73 55 79 14 29 93 71 40 67 53 88 30 03 49 13 36 65 52 70 95 23 04 60 11 42 69 24 68 56 01 32 56 71 37 02 36 91 22 31 16 71 51 67 63 89 41 92 36 54 22 40 40 28 66 33 13 80 24 47 32 60 99 03 45 02 44 75 33 53 78 36 84 20 35 17 12 50 32 98 81 28 64 23 67 10 26 38 40 67 59 54 70 66 18 38 64 70 67 26 20 68 02 62 12 20 95 63 94 39 63 08 40 91 66 49 94 21 24 55 58 05 66 73 99 26 97 17 78 78 96 83 14 88 34 89 63 72 21 36 23 09 75 00 76 44 20 45 35 14 00 61 33 97 34 31 33 95 78 17 53 28 22 75 31 67 15 94 03 80 04 62 16 14 09 53 56 92 16 39 05 42 96 35 31 47 55 58 88 24 00 17 54 24 36 29 85 57 86 56 00 48 35 71 89 07 05 44 44 37 44 60 21 58 51 54 17 58 19 80 81 68 05 94 47 69 28 73 92 13 86 52 17 77 04 89 55 40 04 52 08 83 97 35 99 16 07 97 57 32 16 26 26 79 33 27 98 66 88 36 68 87 57 62 20 72 03 46 33 67 46 55 12 32 63 93 53 69 04 42 16 73 38 25 39 11 24 94 72 18 08 46 29 32 40 62 76 36 20 69 36 41 72 30 23 88 34 62 99 69 82 67 59 85 74 04 36 16 20 73 35 29 78 31 90 01 74 31 49 71 48 86 81 16 23 57 05 54 01 70 54 71 83 51 54 69 16 92 33 48 61 43 52 01 89 19 67 48 What is the greatest product of four adjacent numbers in any direction (up, down, left, right, or diagonally) in the 2020 grid?

I looked into using Incanter but didn’t get it setup as I am using Clojure 1.4, and had some issues getting the dependencies resolved. No big deal though, as I just used a vector of vectors to represent a matrix. I created a new file matrix.clj, which got the namespace definition for project-euler.matrix.

(ns project-euler.matrix)

The first function I defined was `transpose`

, since I am going to want to work against the columns, but rows are easier to think about and work with.

(defn transpose [m] (vec (apply map vector m)))

Since I am going to need to find groups of four numbers in the matrix, I defined the following to functions to get all possible groups of four in the rows, and in the columns.

(defn partition-rows [m n step] (if (= (count m) 0) [] (concat (partition n step (first m)) (partition-rows (rest m) n step)))) (defn partition-columns [m n step] (partition-rows (transpose m) n step))

The `partition-rows`

function just concats the results of calling partition on each row with the group size, `n`

, and the step, by calling partition on the first row of the matrix `(first m)`

, and then calling `partition-rows`

again with the remaining rows in the matrix given `(rest m)`

. The function `partition-columns`

simply transposes the matrix `m`

and then calls `partition-rows`

with that matrix.

The next two functions are two helper functions, which were defined after writing some of the following functions, and exist to better express intent.

(defn matrix-get [m r c] (nth (nth m r) c)) (defn row [m n] (nth m n))

The function `matrix-get`

gets the `r`

th row from the matrix `m`

and then gets the `c`

th item in that row. The function `row`

gets the row for a matrix. Again nothing special about these functions except that they help to communicate the intent, and give the concept a name. These were littered around the code so the functions were created as part of tidying up. In looking at it as I was writing up this post, I realized I still didn’t pull out the concept of row in the function `matrix-get`

, and the two functions should probably be defined as follows instead:

(defn row [m n] (nth m n)) (defn matrix-get [m r c] (nth (row m r) c))

Working through getting the diagonals, I posted a call for help about a clean way to get the diagonals for a matrix in the post Smelly matrix diagonals. I got some good comments, and after taking a bit to pick apart the functions, I went with the following from the comments, thanks to Mark.

(defn diagonals [m] (let [rdim (count m) cdim (count (first m))] (->> (for [r (range rdim), c (range cdim)] {(+ r (- cdim c)) [(matrix-get m r c)]}) (apply merge-with into) vals)))

This worked great, but I also needed to get the diagonals going from the bottom left to the top right, which resulted in the function `reverse-diagonals`

.

(defn reverse-diagonals [m] (let [rdim (count m) cdim (count (first m))] (->> (for [r (range rdim), c (range cdim)] {(+ r c) [(matrix-get m r c)]}) (apply merge-with into) vals)))

As this was almost the same function as diagonals, with just a different function for getting the key, so I extracted a function `matrix-lines`

which resulted in:

(defn matrix-lines [m f] (let [rdim (count m) cdim (count (first m))] (->> (for [r (range rdim), c (range cdim)] {(f rdim cdim r c) [(matrix-get m r c)]}) (apply merge-with into) vals))) (defn diagonals [m] (matrix-lines m (fn [rdim cdim r c] (+ r (- cdim c))))) (defn reverse-diagonals [m] (matrix-lines m (fn [rdim cdim r c] (+ r c))))

Where the function `matrix-lines`

will generate the lines based off of a function to generate a key for a given cell.

I have seen that it is idiomatic Clojure code to use `_`

s to signify function variables that are not used, so looking at this with some fresh eyes, should those variables defined in the functions `diagonals`

and `reverse-diagonals`

be an `_`

instead, even though they are the first bindings to the function?

The last part of working with the matrix that I needed were functions to partition the diagonals, and get all the partitioned diagonals in both directions.

(defn partition-diagonals [m n diagonals-fn] (apply concat (map #(partition n 1 %) (diagonals-fn m)))) (defn partition-every-diagonal [m n] (concat (partition-diagonals m n diagonals) (partition-diagonals m n reverse-diagonals)))

The function `partition-diagonals`

returns the result of `concat`

ing every resulting seq from calling `partition`

on every result of call the `diagonals-fn`

which is the function to get the diagonals that was passed in as the second parameter. The function `partition-every-diagonal`

simply `concat`

s the results of calling `partition-diagonals`

with the functions `diagonals`

and `reverse-diagonals`

.

(defn problem11 [] (let [m [[ 8 2 22 97 38 15 0 40 0 75 4 5 7 78 52 12 50 77 91 8] [49 49 99 40 17 81 18 57 60 87 17 40 98 43 69 48 4 56 62 0] [81 49 31 73 55 79 14 29 93 71 40 67 53 88 30 3 49 13 36 65] [52 70 95 23 4 60 11 42 69 24 68 56 1 32 56 71 37 2 36 91] [22 31 16 71 51 67 63 89 41 92 36 54 22 40 40 28 66 33 13 80] [24 47 32 60 99 3 45 2 44 75 33 53 78 36 84 20 35 17 12 50] [32 98 81 28 64 23 67 10 26 38 40 67 59 54 70 66 18 38 64 70] [67 26 20 68 2 62 12 20 95 63 94 39 63 8 4 91 66 49 94 21] [24 55 58 5 66 73 99 26 97 17 78 78 96 83 14 88 34 89 63 72] [21 36 23 9 75 0 76 44 20 45 35 14 0 61 33 97 34 31 33 95] [78 17 53 28 22 75 31 67 15 94 3 80 4 62 16 14 9 53 56 92] [16 39 5 42 96 35 31 47 55 58 88 24 0 17 54 24 36 29 85 57] [86 56 0 48 35 71 89 7 5 44 44 37 44 60 21 58 51 54 17 58] [19 80 81 68 5 94 47 69 28 73 92 13 86 52 17 77 4 89 55 40] [ 4 52 8 83 97 35 99 16 7 97 57 32 16 26 26 79 33 27 98 66] [88 36 68 87 57 62 20 72 3 46 33 67 46 55 12 32 63 93 53 69] [ 4 42 16 73 38 25 39 11 24 94 72 18 8 46 29 32 40 62 76 36] [20 69 36 41 72 30 23 88 34 62 99 69 82 67 59 85 74 4 36 16] [20 73 35 29 78 31 90 1 74 31 49 71 48 86 81 16 23 57 5 54] [ 1 70 54 71 83 51 54 69 16 92 33 48 61 43 52 1 89 19 67 48]]] (apply max (map multiply (concat (partition-rows m 4 1) (partition-columns m 4 1) (partition-every-diagonal m 4))))))

The function `problem11`

applys the function `max`

to the result of calling `multiply`

on every possible partition of the matrix m, to get largest multiple of ‘four adjacent numbers in any direction’.

So far, this has been the Project Euler problem with the most code that was needed to solve the problem, including the ones I have solved but not posted answers to yet. While overall this is still not a great deal of code, I am wondering if there are any things that I am missing that might make this even more concise and expressive.

Is there anything that I have missed? Anything interesting in my approach? Again, I thank you in advance for any comments that you might have on this.

Thanks again,

–Proctor